Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: Ashes ( Dallas martin singng)
Reviewer: Michael Cregan
Positive Comments: I like the demo. The vocal and playing are very good and at a professional level. I can see this being a great tune to hear live.
Constructive Comments: My main concerns are two. There technically is a hook, but it is not enough of a hook to really grab me, and it doesn’t come up until after the songs been going a while. I’d like the hook to come in earlier. The hook is now the phrase “Ashes to Ashes all fall down.” The rest of the chorus, after this one listen, I am not sure what the chorus is. It is not sticking with me. A lot of good things about this song, just a more memorable chorus, with the phrase, would boost it in my memory.