Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Elvis On A Telephone Pole
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Nice classic rock intro. This song is cute and funny – a story about a rocker meeting Elvis on top of a telephone poll. Considering the Elvis sightings that have happened over the years, this is a great premise for a song, and the chorus is very catchy! The lyrics of the verses are also carefully and cleverly written….tight and fresh rhyming work. Well done! Your song put a smile on my face for sure. Spoken word at the end was a good way to conclude your song. I bet your audiences get a kick out of this one.
Constructive Comments: I’d like to hear the vocal a little more “up” in the mix. Upon the second listen, I caught everything I missed the first time around, so no big deal. You have a great sense of humor and musicality…keep up the good work!Mrs. Kate in Florida