Month: February 2017

Broadjam Artist: Robert Wuagneux
Song: Country Girl

Reviewer: Gary Mazzola

Positive Comments: love the slide, good driving beat. tight rhythm section. nice back vocals

Constructive Comments: Background vocals could be loader. leads vocal seems not to have much energy behind it. its got a driving beat the vocal needs to match that. this could be much better if you tightin up the vocals and phrasing. this is just my opinion.

Broadjam Artist: Simon Finn
Song: Cyber Cowboy

Reviewer: The Watchman

Positive Comments: Wow! This is great. You have a great voice and this is produced well. Everything is professional. The arrangement,the recording, instrumentation and the vocals are great. Have you made it already? This could be on the radio not just because of the quality but because it is really good. If you have not made it you need to just get to the right person. Your chorus has a great catch to it. Good things coming. also pat the person on the back who produced this song.

Constructive Comments: The only thing I can even think of is the European club feel in the second part I think. This song is country pop and it may confuse to have that part in there, but even with it in there it is an awesome song production wise and vocal wise.

Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Superficies Subterraneas (Subterranean Surfaces)

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: I love this! Wow! Talk about an exciting, fun-to-listen-to track. From the awesome introduction to the creative ending sequence, this track is amazingly put together. A stroke of genius, if you ask me. It has a trance-mesmerizing quality without being boring at all. I love the transitions and walkdowns. Fast-moving and fun, definitely dance-able. I would think this could be commercially viable in the video game market or perhaps movies. Way to go, and I’d definitely like to hear more of your work.

Constructive Comments: What will you come up with next? Love your creativity! Mrs. Kate in FL

Broadjam Artist: Hank Thomas
Song: And The Horse You Rode In On feat. Audrey McDonald

Reviewer: Gary Mazzola

Positive Comments: love the guitar sound and the fiddle. nice song. tight drums bass and rythum

Constructive Comments: voice needs to be cleaner seems like coming out of a box. instruments need more separation.but it mainly the voice recording needs to be clearer because shes got a great voice i can tell.

Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: BOUND FOR NOWHERE (performed by GORD MAXWELL)

Reviewer: Gary Mazzola

Positive Comments: nicely written song. good hook. like the vocals too

Constructive Comments: background instrumentation seems a little muddy. i thing raising the key would give it more energy. it did at the end. good song overall

Broadjam Artist: Glenda Jackson
Song: Running Back Into Your Arms Again

Reviewer: The Watchman

Positive Comments: good song. Very emotional and vulnerable song. You chord progression was good. The song was somewhere between worship and a rock ballad and it was neat. Your instrumentation, recording and production were good. The message of the song was strong. A true touching my heart song toward God.

Constructive Comments: Your voice is good but would get a little pitchy during the calling,calling calling part. That is the only area I did not like. The calling calling calling part of the song. I did not like that part repeated and you came through a little off in that area. But other than that it was really good.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: With A Kiss To Say I Love You / R&B

Reviewer: The Watchman

Positive Comments: Nice and relaxing. Good song. Your have a great concept here it just needs to be tightened up. Keep it up. I really did enjoy the mood of the song. I think it has a lot potential.

Constructive Comments: It is a little soft in the recording/production area. A few time s the guitar seemed jumbled. but over all it was good it just seem a little soft and questioning sometimes.

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: La La Life!

Reviewer: The Watchman

Positive Comments: Great message first off. The song is infectiously happy. Your recording is very good. This song should be in a video very similar to the Donut Man. Nice recording on the guitar and the drums. Arrangement and chord structure of really good. Your song has big market potential for christian kids videos. Keep it up.

Constructive Comments: Not really much to say about it being improved. For the market and the reason you wrote it, it stands on its own. Great job.

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth
Song: Gonna Be On Time

Reviewer: The Watchman

Positive Comments: Good song. Sounds like Eric Clapton and the dead mixed together. Unique sound/finger print. good instrumentation. There is a big market for your music. Similar to the band Fish. Nice sound on the guitar solo. Your voice is good I wanted to here it a little clearer. Your music is good and there is definitely a market for it keep it up.

Constructive Comments: Please realize my critique of the song is just music and production preference. I want to hear a harder snare hit that would drive it a little bit more and a less muddy sounding bass. They were good but loose. I wanted a tighter bass sound. Articulate on your lyrics a little more. It was good.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Light Shine

Reviewer: The Watchman

Positive Comments: Very nice strong melody line in the beginning. Your hook was good. The chord change was fitting. Your voice is unique and I almost felt a little pitchy but it grew on me. Like a Bob dylan sound. The song reminded me of the 70, 80 southern rock. Good vocal effects on your voice. The arrangement of the song was really good. Over all the song is catchy and has that all American feel to it, like John Melloncamp. great job.

Constructive Comments: Because this song has such great potential I would have a better producer do it. It is a little soft. It needs to be compressed or limited and cranked up a little bit more. Like the melody line in the beginning. It was really good and catchy but I wanted it out front louder and clearer. Keep it up.