Month: January 2017

Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: Shout To Jesus

Reviewer: IBP

Positive Comments: Very good mood in the structure of the instrumental.

Constructive Comments: Maybe add a little more heights in it.

Broadjam Artist: Kitty Matkins
Song: Whispers In The Darkness

Reviewer: IBP

Positive Comments: Emotional song, lyrics are good connected with the melody.

Constructive Comments: The theme “Love lost” is very common and the recording should be improved.

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth
Song: BEFORE THE WORLD STOPS SPINNIN!

Reviewer: IBP

Positive Comments: Very good hook and vocal pitch, lyrics are easy to memorize.

Constructive Comments: The quality of the recording should be improved.

Broadjam Artist: Mike Cantwell – TalentEast Productions
Song: Glory (Electronic Instrumental) NEW!

Reviewer: IBP

Positive Comments: The instrumental is fit for science movie background.

Constructive Comments: The sound is far too common.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Onion Head

Reviewer: IBP

Positive Comments: It’s a good instrumental, appropriate in my opinion for high-speed computer games like NFS.

Constructive Comments: The instrumental is very common, maybe add something more dramatic in it.

Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: Salvation Army Man

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth

Positive Comments: ok good like it so far its not overproduced like 90% of what I hear these days nice voice!

Constructive Comments: Sounds like you are red lining the vocals you can go back and rerecord the vocals and leave some headroom this timeYou’ve got a solid,well written song worthy of being recorded properly, at least from my humble perspective after 50 years of professional playing!Keep the Good Stuff coming! Catnip Pat

Broadjam Artist: Mike Cantwell – TalentEast Productions
Song: Glory (Electronic Instrumental) NEW!

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth

Positive Comments: interesting tunereminds me of a Highway song or a driving song

Constructive Comments: Well its ok but it needs some kind of break the new instrument at 2:20 provides some change from the main themeYou could go back and cut in a break of some type that would keep it interesting!All The Best For Music! Catnip Pat

Broadjam Artist: Floyd Kelly
Song: Sepia’s Waltz

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth

Positive Comments: pleasing sounds and relaxing as well good job with the strings too

Constructive Comments: this song left me a little unsatisfied in that I was waiting for a break and return as in most songs it seemed to be kinda stuck in second gearYour general idea is good and worthy of some minor shaping as noted aboveAll the Best! Catnip Pat

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Elvis On A Telephone Pole

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth

Positive Comments: good idea nice choice of instruments

Constructive Comments: overall a nice sound I think the artist accomplished his purpose on this cutif anything I would add another dimension to this by adding one more lyrical verse with a another slant, add a screaming lead, or emodulate one 1/2 step higherbut its ok just like it is!I appreciate your effort! Catnip

Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: EVERYBODY DREAMS (performed by JENNY GALT)

Reviewer: Tom Reardon

Positive Comments: I really liked the song. Great vocalist, love her tone. Nice transitions to other sections of the song. Especially at around 1:45, that was my favorite one.

Constructive Comments: The only thing I would change is the mix. It was a little muddy in some spots. A little more clarity would enhance the song.