Month: January 2017

Broadjam Artist: David J. Hentosh
Song: I’m In Love With You

Reviewer: STEPHEN CONNOLLY

Positive Comments: kind of a different approach to country so I called it unique

Constructive Comments: vocals need a little tweaking in the pitch department

Broadjam Artist: Denis Hackett
Song: W’eve Got Time

Reviewer: STEPHEN CONNOLLY

Positive Comments: like the piano and vocal but would love to hear it with a full band sound

Constructive Comments: try recording it with a full band

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: I Never Thought I’d Ever Feel This Good

Reviewer: STEPHEN CONNOLLY

Positive Comments: nice vocal and easy going song

Constructive Comments: it seems like there needs to be a break from verse/chorus to make it really stand out—I do not hear that in this song

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Move / Pop Dance

Reviewer: STEPHEN CONNOLLY

Positive Comments: nice beat, good feel

Constructive Comments: seems like the subject matter has been used millions of times so to keep the listener happy there has to be a lot of unexpected changes in the music Take Justins Timberlakes last song with dance in it for example—lots of musical changes with the dance term still in it

Broadjam Artist: Osea Codega
Song: Let’s start the fire

Reviewer: STEPHEN CONNOLLY

Positive Comments: reminds me of some 80s pop songs

Constructive Comments: the accent on the voalists makes some of the song hard to understand, maybe try it with a female singer also otherwise good song

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: Don’t Waste Your Time ( featuring AmieLee )

Reviewer: STEPHEN CONNOLLY

Positive Comments: The song has potential to be a really good rock song I would like to hear it again with a possible male vocal—-No offence made I just think this sounds like a good song for a male rock singer..Keep it up good overall

Constructive Comments: possible a male vocal also

Broadjam Artist: HAWCO
Song: Flower in the Desert

Reviewer: amy abernathy

Positive Comments: I saw this more like a southern rock songs rather than country, but I liked it.The guitar playing was good, it was very tender and worked well with your voice.You had a soft and I could feel the emotion in your voice, it made the song very engaging. I thought it was very pretty, good work on it.

Constructive Comments: I would have liked to have heard a few changes in the melody, especialy by the chorus. Maybe more push with the drums behind the chorus, to make it stand out a little bit. I think it needs a few tweaks but enjoyed it.

Broadjam Artist: Denis Hackett
Song: Some Other Day

Reviewer: Bill Dake

Positive Comments: Really nice jazz ballad. It’s well balanced, with the vocal up front and an accompaniment that complimented the vocalist.

Constructive Comments: This is a nice demo, would really like to hear this with a live studio band, upright bass, and a couple horns, maybe a tenor sax or muted trumpet solo. Good tune!

Broadjam Artist: J Edna Mae Thomas
Song: Luminous

Reviewer: Bill Dake

Positive Comments: Nice balance between vocals and instrumentation. Lovely voices. Simple and effective arrangement.

Constructive Comments: I wanted to rate this song higher, but I just couldn’t understand the lyrics. To my old ears it all blended nicely but I couldn’t make out what was being said. Might be the similarity in timber and pitch with the piano. I don’t think it was the balance. Lovely song, just wish I could distinguish the lyrics.

Broadjam Artist: J Edna Mae Thomas
Song: Deal with the Devil

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth

Positive Comments: ohhh Nice Strong clear vocal trained voice and nice keys!

Constructive Comments: Full Production would sound nice Kudos the the engineer on this nice piece! Wouldn’t add too much to this song, maybe strings toward the end! Has much potential!Good Luck! Catnip