Month: January 2017

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Last Free Man In America

Reviewer: David J. Hentosh

Positive Comments: This has a rock feel with a country touch that makes it a little hard for me to categorize (I hate categorizing anyway) but it does come across strong. The arrangement and instrumentation fit the song well.

Constructive Comments: I think the harmonies should be brought out more in the mix because they work very well and add a lot to the chorus. The lead guitar also gets a little lost. Being even more picky, I would also do more with the bass line because there is room for its expansion in the arrangement.

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Ganja Dance With Me / Rock Ska

Reviewer: The Song Writers

Positive Comments: It’s there and it’s short. low 5

Constructive Comments: Short is good but a journey that takes you somewhere instead of a traffic light would be better.Add some contrast to the mix for the audience to remember, TSW.

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Alligator

Reviewer: The Song Writers

Positive Comments: Wow! you rock Girl. Sounds like you could be from the south? What ever it maybe you sound good to mE. Hi 5 Sister….

Constructive Comments: Make more of these kind of records. Very cool Stuff I’m hearing. Lots of Soul, TSW.

Broadjam Artist: Vicki Lee
Song: Tell Me

Reviewer: The Song Writers

Positive Comments: This record would be awesome if you popped out of a cake at a bachelor’s party -) Very entertaining blues here. Hi 5 girl this track is cool.

Constructive Comments: How about adding some horns like a trumpet or some kind of variety section of the brass instruments to make it more sexy. Good job, TSW.

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey
Song: Kitschy Kool NEW DRUMS & SAX

Reviewer: The Song Writers

Positive Comments: Interesting for sure, but can’t quite pin point the genre. Very welcoming, sociable, and the volume is light and easy. Not bad.

Constructive Comments: Why don’t you increase the volume and clear up the clutter and define your arrangement, and then you got something better. Still like the original. Give you a low 5 for now. Good job, TSW.

Broadjam Artist: FRED GROSS
Song: (Billy) The Kid

Reviewer: The Song Writers

Positive Comments: Extremely cool vibe dude. This record is perfect for a hot day inside El bar Amigo why do we go.Bad ass tune Hi 5 on this side.

Constructive Comments: Go and promote this song for the radio. Everyone needs to hear this record, TSW.

Broadjam Artist: Tristyn Leach
Song: Easy on me Baby

Reviewer: Robert Wuagneux

Positive Comments: A really nice tribute to SWAMP BOOGIE…The band is in sync and keeps the groove smooth. The arrangement is classic. The story is a tried and true one that is very easy to tie in with.

Constructive Comments: I somewhat like the vocal approach. There were a few times where I could not discern the words, which very easily could be me. I never heard a real HOOK. I am sure it is there I may have missed it entirely it happens. I was also looking for a slight dynamic change to wrinkle my ear a little. This is a cool tune. Good luck with it!!!

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Dry & Blue / Delta Blues

Reviewer: Robert Wuagneux

Positive Comments: Although it may seem otherwise to you, I REALLY LIKE THIS PIECE.I just don’t feel as though it is finished. You have a lot of places where you can put an exclamation point on an idea. the playing is clear and decisive. I didn’t hear a definitive hook I did hear a lilting lazy theme that has a haunting quality. This tune has a lot of room to grow…play with it!!!

Constructive Comments: My constructive comments were in my first response. They are ALL positive. You have a warm sound and clean play. I look forward to hearing more from you.

Broadjam Artist: Bill Dake
Song: Northern Climes (Folk-Americana)

Reviewer: Robert Wuagneux

Positive Comments: A real island-y feel to this tune. The approach is very James Mee from Vermont. The personal touch of the lyric grabs the ear.

Constructive Comments: I like the approach the artist takes with this tune. The mix is warm and personal which complements the story. the simple arrangement is not as simple as it sounds due to the deft delivery of each component of this tune. VERY COOL!!!!

Broadjam Artist: Chet Nichols
Song: The Mother Road (#1 Folk-Americana)

Reviewer: Robert Wuagneux

Positive Comments: This song has a nice “feel” and its lyrical imagery evokes a reflection of peace, and harmony. Vocalist sounds sincere. Delivery is smooth and clear.

Constructive Comments: I like this song. It sends a positive message and the music supports its intent. It is gentle, clear, and evocative. It has a reminiscent “SAILING” effect for me