Peer Song Reviews From Broadjam.com
Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: The Wonder Of Autum
Reviewer: Mark R. Harris
Positive Comments: it was a good attempt at writing a tune….a good start
Constructive Comments: the main problem with this tune is it meandered too much from establishing a memorable theme or a hook…i just couldn’t latch onto anything…some of the midi instruments just sounded a little thin and fake…it also ended rather abruptly , in my opinion….keep writing man!
Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: The Wonder Of Autum
Reviewer: Mark R. Harris
Positive Comments: it was a good attempt at writing a tune….a good start
Constructive Comments: the main problem with this tune is it meandered too much from establishing a memorable theme or a hook…i just couldn’t latch onto anything…some of the midi instruments just sounded a little thin and fake…it also ended rather abruptly , in my opinion….keep writing man!