Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Ocaso a la Orilla del Mar (Sunset by the Seaside).
Reviewer: CyclopsCow
Positive Comments: I think it would help to make this song sound more inspirational if there were some sort of vocal/choral parts throughout this song. It sounds very airy, and the sea tide sounds help. The ending, after that brief pause, I think should be tied back to the beginning of the song instead of the ending itself. Can you add some seagull sounds? That would be a cute touch. Anyway, thank you for the song!
Constructive Comments: I was thinking this song would bring some feeling of inspiration, but it was pretty flat feeling, in that it didn’t really give me goose bumps. I was really hoping that. The continued arpegiated line running throughout the song I think should be a little bit softer, not in its volume, with with the attach on the notes. Just turn the attack down a bit, so that it does not compete with the main melody theme going on.