Broadjam Artist: RICARDO ALONSO
Song: Alborada (Morning Twilight)
Reviewer: CyclopsCow
Positive Comments: The song has an inspiration feel to it. I noticed, just by chance, that the basic structure of the song is A B A A, is that correct? Try introducing another theme that brings more of a climax in the end of the song. And have the beginning more mellow. Perhaps change the B section to be more mysterious, making it B’, so when it comes to the new C theme, that there is something to go out with in a more positive way.
Constructive Comments: The sound of the drums are the very typical keyboard/drum machine sound. I would improve that. The main theme with the keyboard is kind of boring for me, I wish I it would change some more. I wish there would be more than just keyboards in this. Even the strings sound like the keyboard. I realize that this artist, being in the “New Age” genre, likes to use keyboards, but I just don’t dig the entire song being just a keyboard. I would like to hear more of a variety in the instrumentation in this song.