Broadjam Artist: N.Jones, Music Designer (Protilius Productions)
Song: Idols (2015)
Reviewer: J Edna Mae Thomas
Positive Comments: Nice start – good contrast between timbres and great build with drums.Really interesting shift in rhythms throughout! Fab!Middle – good choice of timbre – shift in the feelGood solid structureDrums – good use of different rhythms, fill ins etc throughoutVery last part – quiet ending note is a good contrast to the rest of the piece.
Constructive Comments: Job well done! Not easy to suggest any ideas.However, if I were going to suggest, I would say that your very last section, starting at 3.30, could use more of either the contrast in your earlier sections, or more of a build up to a climactic ending. I can hear something starting to build in the background – maybe develop this melodic idea.