Month: December 2016

Broadjam Artist: Jay Paperz
Song: MONEY

Reviewer: 80s

Positive Comments: nice instrumental

Constructive Comments: to much going on

Broadjam Artist: Paul Mills
Song: Thats Enough

Reviewer: Jeff Maguire

Positive Comments: Smokin blues rock tune in the style of Stevie , Eric, Albert ect …. sweet guitar tone.

Constructive Comments: Noting to criticize really, some of the doubled vocals don’t really cut it to my ear. It’s a guitar tune, so just play on.

Broadjam Artist: Floyd Kelly
Song: Mr. Clue

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: Very cool sounding keyboards, I really like the drums and cymbals as well. This song would be a great soundtrack to a Chase Scene.

Constructive Comments: I really like this one, the only thing that I dislike is the beginning drums beats – I think a ride cymbal would sound much better – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Roberts
Song: Out of the Gaze of the Evil Eye

Reviewer: Randal Dunkle

Positive Comments: I really like the sound of the drums and the lead guitar, very cool vocals and backing vocals as well. I also really like the arrangement and the mix, sounds a lot like the Grateful Dead.

Constructive Comments: Good sounding Rock Song – I think it would sound better with a lead guitar in the introduction, but this song really sounds great just the way it is – best wishes!

Broadjam Artist: Charles Bunting
Song: Whats True to me

Reviewer: Laurence Watkins

Positive Comments: Nice premise about the way we write. We go to bed and wake up with the lyrical and musical phrases.Really enjoyed this.Nice work.

Constructive Comments: More please.

Broadjam Artist: Shirah Kahol
Song: Bitch in High Heels

Reviewer: Gladstone Avenue

Positive Comments: Song has a very fresh sound. Nicely done. I am torn in giving a title to the song…Bitch in High Heels or Pieces….and finally settled on Pieces. Just simple and leaves the listener open to examine the lyrics of the song. Bitch in High Heels may be just as strong…I just think that for me, it predisposes the listener to what they are about to hear. But a well done song.

Constructive Comments: I can’t sing. I am a song writer who wishes I had a voice like the one on this song. Still, the vocal strays off key in several places and that always bothers me. Also, I think that the vocal mix and timing could be more solid. If you voice-over I’d suggest you just used a slight delay of the first vocal…or tighten up the voice-over. I say this because I like the song and I think a little more work on the vocal production could help a lot!!

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: DESIRE

Reviewer: Laurence Watkins

Positive Comments: This could be Earl C ?If it is more really good work !Really enjoyed this- very cool. Great keyboards.Best track I’ve heard on Broadjam for a long time 1

Constructive Comments: More of this please !

Broadjam Artist: Paul Mills
Song: You Cant Have Your Cake

Reviewer: Laurence Watkins

Positive Comments: Yes I really enjoyed this track.Nice blues licks and soundscape.Great guitar work.

Constructive Comments: More please !

Broadjam Artist: James Neilson Graham
Song: I’ve Got a Load on My Mind

Reviewer: Laurence Watkins

Positive Comments: VERY clever.Its hard to do this, so to be humorous with music.I’d like to hear more.

Constructive Comments: More please !

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Insecurity

Reviewer: Laurence Watkins

Positive Comments: Really polished arrangement.Strong vocal.Nice slide guitar.

Constructive Comments: Just keep the songs coming.