Broadjam Artist: Rachel Joy
Song: I Can Always Count On You
Reviewer: Black Eye Affair
Positive Comments: The arrangement combined elements of several styles and created a thing of its own. It was interesting to see the aspects of 80’s synth-pop combined with classical, and even eastern elements. Kudos on thinking outside the box in a genre that can be very cookie cutter. Don’t let the low scores bring you down, I can see in this song that you are a talented individual.
Constructive Comments: The quality of the sounds was not very good. You may want to invest in some better software with an improved sound library. Also, the vocals were pitchy and in need of tuning. Don’t be afraid of some light tuning – Melodyne is your friend. Especially in the pop genre, where it is 100% expected to be tuned to perfection. Structure wise, you need to work on the hook. Maybe shorten it, simplify the melody, and make it more memorable. Keep cooking. It sounds like you have the goods.