Broadjam Artist: Jeff Maguire
Song: Last Free Man In America
Reviewer: amy abernathy
Positive Comments: I liked the song , but it had an old school vibe. i think the arrangement could be better, to make the song great. Nice concept.
Constructive Comments: The song was a little pitchy in places, but had a good message. I would update the arrangement, it sounded a little dated. Nice concept.It is almost there but needs a little work to be a four or five.I would suggest a verse to describe who the last free man was, it was not real clear in the lyrics, the story was not complete. You have a great start, a little tweaks would make it much better.