Broadjam Artist: Cat Lamondt
Song: I see you Love
Reviewer: Mike Cantwell – TalentEast Productions
Positive Comments: Good songwriting, I like the sound of the Vocal. Good job overall.
Constructive Comments: The recording is more like a demo recording. A little rough on the overall sound. The instruments seem to be played just fine. And the vocal is good. I’m not getting the gist of the song. I’m not catching the story. I think the story doesn’t go with the music. Maybe it could be done differently to hear the lyrics better. Maybe, a different pace or dynamics or chords. The hook is “I’m Loving What I See”. I couldn’t follow or hear clearly what the story is. Also, maybe you should repeat that hook (or a rewrite hook) again in the Chorus to drive it home.