Broadjam Artist: Randal Dunkle
Song: At The Foot Of The Cross
Reviewer: CyclopsCow
Positive Comments: I get the intention of the song as being inspiring for religious concerns, and I appreciate that. The overall sound of the instrumentation appears to me that you are intending to sound driven and inspired with your message. But to do that, make your instrument parts inspiring and not extravagant or trying to be extremely unique. Thank you for the song.
Constructive Comments: The drum track tells me that you used either a drum machine or drums on a keyboard. Drummers don’t normally play the way you programmed the part. I would say change the drum part. It sounds like the drummer is trying to be like Keith Moon for a Religious Rock song.And if you are going to do that, then the guitars should be more like the Who as well. The lyrics are very week and not impressive. They are pretty flat in enthusiasm and punch. I would also say replace the vocals with someone who can sing better. Sorry, just my real opinion. Not that I am a vocalist either, because I am not!If you are going to submit this for licensing, then you will also need to fix the mix.