Broadjam Artist: Paul Mills
Song: South On The Strip
Reviewer: Bill Dake
Positive Comments: I like the groove. Tight rhythm section.
Constructive Comments: This seems more like a jam session than a tune. Could use a more defined melody. The bass line is fine, but the whole tune just seems to stay in the same place. The solos and the rhythm section blend together and the solos get lost, I’d try to separate them more and maybe EQ them differently. Also, back off a bit on the effects so the different instruments can have their own voice. Finally, add a bridge to break up the vamp and give the listener a little surprise.