
Broadjam Artist: Bill Dake
Song: Short Story (Folk-Contemporary)
Reviewer: Randal Dunkle
Positive Comments: I like the guitar introduction and the way the song starts – the sound of the drums are very good as well – I also like how the keyboards mellow the song out, very cool lead guitar too. Sounds a little like Steely Dan.
Constructive Comments: I really like this song, beautiful lyrics and a great ending – the vocals are a little out of pitch on occasion, I would really try to work on that – I’ve learned that vocals are really important, they can make or break a song – best wishes!