Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey, S. & A. Corey
Song: Dark Desert Sky
Reviewer: Cat Lamondt
Positive Comments: Nice melody, lyrics are very workable and with a little polish it could become a great hit song! Well done. Great job overall. Depending on what the song is intended for this is a song that could easily lean itself to numerous opportunities. Good job! Keep writing and composing. Lovely vocal for this genre.
Constructive Comments: I suggest a more definite difference between verse and chorus. As a personal preference I like a 60% vocal, 40% instrumentation sound on country music because the lyrics and storyline is so important. When there is space for an instrumental solo, I would suggest that it would enhance the song but not compete with the vocal. Sometimes with a song such as this I believe that less is more when it comes to the arrangement. If an instrument doesn’t have a specific purpose rather leave it out.