MADELEINE by Earl.C.Webb

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.WebbSong: MADELEINEReviewer: Keith TaylorPositive Comments: This song has potential. Great hook.Constructive Comments: I think the lyrics in the verses could be tweaked a bit to really put this one very the top. Example the fir…

Earl.C.Webb

Broadjam Artist: Earl.C.Webb
Song: MADELEINE

Reviewer: Keith Taylor

Positive Comments: This song has potential. Great hook.

Constructive Comments: I think the lyrics in the verses could be tweaked a bit to really put this one very the top. Example the first verse you rhyme “glass” with “self”. That last line might work better with something like “with someone from my past”. Second verse it is “sure” and “more”. This is close but not close enough in my mind.