Broadjam Artist: Steve Dafoe – Songwriter
Song: Shelter In Your Lovin’ Arms (Adult Contemporary)
Reviewer: a man’s voyage
Positive Comments: The guitar in this kept to the correct timing, and it carried the song along quite nicely. This song reminds me of something that might be played at a bar or and some sort of small show. I enjoyed the artists voice, and he remained on key for the entirety of the piece. The part of this song that has the most potential in my opinion is the vocals.
Constructive Comments: The song never really seemed to lead anywhere, instead it kind of went around in circles. The vocals were good, but there wasn’t anything within the first couple of minutes that really made me want to keep listening. I would suggest adding some sort of crescendo to the arrangement. The strumming pattern doesn’t really change at all, which is why the song seems so repetitive. Overall, the artist has some potential. I would just recommend thinking outside of the box a little bit more. Go places within your music that nobody would expect, and your music will take YOU to places that you would never expect.