Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: Au Chocolat / Gypsy Jazz
Reviewer: Josh Walker
Positive Comments: I like the concept and the instrumentation you’re using for this song, like the Motel 6 song. You have some good elements here, like trading the melody from guitar to the violin sound.
Constructive Comments: This sounds like a work in progress, and that’s why I rated it so low. I think it could be good, but I wouldn’t post it on here until everything is worked out. That is, unless you’re looking for feedback I suppose. You definitely need a better recording, but you may already know that. The first thing I hear is some massive static noise that overwhelms everything. The guitar rhythm isn’t particularly tight, and there isn’t a very clean attack at times. I think if you can refine your melody in the violin and make it more memorable, it will also help. Good luck!