Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: The Betty Song
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Top notch performances on all instruments and great production. This sounds like a studio hire band. The vocals are very clear and smooth.
Constructive Comments: I’ll be honest here–I think the didactic lyrics and shoehorned phrasing make this a pretty boring song as is. I really think you need to distill the essence of the story into more musical lyrics.Cliche: “four winds” and if they blow strong they aren’t a contrast element for love that never fades. And what does a swinging young tree have to do with anything?This all IMO and only meant as honest critique. See how it jibes with what you hear across 10+ reviews. Good luck!!