Broadjam Artist: Laurence Watkins
Song: Musical Messiah
Reviewer: CAEDMON’S DREAM
Positive Comments: + vocals are clear + nice rhythm guitar riffs+ universal message
Constructive Comments: * lyric and guitar lines lead me to think of a rock anthem type of song * doubling guitar parts is effective but have to be in sync with each other in stereo mix* try to find a better rock drum sound and raise level in the mix * needs bass part to strengthen to guitar comping* lead vocal has good intonation and style maybe too much chorus try find a natural sounding reverb for effects * lyric has a strong message develop a lyrical hook that is memorable and repeatable that highlights the theme*** Keep jamming on those guitar parts and build them/add variation as song progresses!!!