Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: To My Baby
Reviewer: Mike Lee
Positive Comments: I loved the music, and the mood of the song. The vocal was also great!
Constructive Comments: I noticed that the length of the song was just a little bit long. I would try to keep it closer to three minutes. I would have liked to hear more visuals instead of mostly info. Paint a picture with your lyrics. This will go far in taking the listener on a journey as they listen. This is something I also struggle with. Have you ever heard the song “Good Directions”? “I was selling turnips on a flat bed truck. Crunchin on a porkrhine when she pulled up…..etc.” This is what is wanted in today’s market. I am also a work in progress. I don’t have any major credits to my name but I have had a lot of critiques and have come real close but no cigar yet. I hope that you find this somewhat helpful. I think you have a lot of potential. You just need to reprogram how you are going to approach your next song. I can hear this song being played during a seen in the movies. A great effort! Keep up the good work!