Broadjam Artist: HarryBudini
Song: Rainbow Bridge
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Well of course it’s Harry! I doubt this is a sincere lullaby but rather something subversive and devious. There are some really great moments in here, particularly the phrasing, melody and harmony on “wherever you are”, which is also a great hook. I wish I could follow the lyrics better. This is such a Sgt Pepper vibe and there is so much potential for this to be an even more strong and compelling tune!
Constructive Comments: I think you’re overtracking the vocals. I think it’d be better to have just the one vocal track for the principal vocal. The chorus needs harmony vocals of course, but not double unison vocals, and make sure all the syllables start and stop together. That other song I reviewed recently had such a good utilization of your voice. Without sitting in the same room it’s hard to know how you could do the singing better but I’m sure you can.The arrangement gets a bit scattered and wandering because it’s long and doesn’t stay focused.