Broadjam Artist: Richard Walker
Song: Clue
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: Sweeing classical piano arpeggios and a very nice baritone voice that sounds a lot like Nick Drake! I actually heard this before and know it’s Richard. The lyrics are strong and profound. This is a really wonderful vocal performance with great timbre and a compelling sense of urgency and conviction.
Constructive Comments: My first suggestion the other day was “think Seal”. I would stick by that. I would really like to hear this with a grooving Pop beat and more pep, less ballad. If you stayed in this vein the piano sound is just a tad too midi and missing acoustic richness of a room and natural harmonics from strings being hit in the air. The sections are a bit pasted together feeling at the moment–it may be that you’re going into the bridge too soon?