L Triumph by Lyfe Concierge Publishing

Broadjam Artist: Lyfe Concierge PublishingSong: L TriumphReviewer: YuriPositive Comments: It has a generally good hook for a heroic theme.Constructive Comments: What stands out immediately are the breaks between parts that are cutoff/edited obruptly. W…

Lyfe Concierge Publishing

Broadjam Artist: Lyfe Concierge Publishing
Song: L Triumph

Reviewer: Yuri

Positive Comments: It has a generally good hook for a heroic theme.

Constructive Comments: What stands out immediately are the breaks between parts that are cutoff/edited obruptly. Work on making better transitions. The parts you have could use more variety in mood, buildup, and orchestration. Give the editor interesting options to work with. Finally, I believe that the track is too compressed overall for this type of music. Try not to lose too much of the dynamics of the orchestra. It’s a good start, though. Good luck!