
Broadjam Artist: Fred Kimmel
Song: Spiral
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Killer intro, excellent theme…I like the idea of the spiral going round and round. Effective word picture (though sad) in the back seat verse. Screaming guitars fit song well. Lead riffs great. Catchy hook. Great job. Danceable.
Constructive Comments: Verse 2 was the most descriptive. Try to make all your verses as succinct. I’m not a rock fan but you did a good job on this one.