Broadjam Artist: Hank Thomas
Song: Lost Time (Feat. Tania Hancheroff)
Reviewer: Katilyn
Positive Comments: You’ve got a GREAT voice! And it’s almost gender-fluid, which is really cool and unique. The instrumentation on this song is great, too…very 90’s country.
Constructive Comments: The idea of the song is good…about siezing the day and not wasting time, but your hook gets kind of lost, the way the song is structured. I would re-work the lyrics in the chorus so that the very last part of a line is “Lost Time”, and DEFINITELY have “lost time” be the very last two words of your chorus, with that echo you’ve got in there, so it sticks in the listener’s mind. I would recommend always ending a chorus on your hook. It might even be cool to have a “Lost time” background vocal echo at the end of each of the four lines in the chorus… “it’s something you can’t ever get back (Lost Time! time time)” “it turns to dust and fades into the black (Lost Time! time time)”. Does that help?