Broadjam Artist: Shadow Creek
Song: Who’s She Wearing it for?’
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: I love the message of the song. This would be a hit with the right music. I would like more of a story. V1 was had to understand. I got the hook by the chorus.1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? NO.2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? 3) Is my melody interesting? NO4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? Some what 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? some what
Constructive Comments: jobs of Each Section (does each section do its job: v1–character, context, setting chorus–give the big idea v2–take the big idea further bridge (if necessary) –take the big idea even further You have the great start to a great song. Just develop your story in V1 and V2 and hit that hook in the chorus.6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? I had a hard time understanding the lyrics7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? I don’t know.8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? Sadness9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? Somewhat 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? maybe with different music