Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: Time Of our Lives Jessa
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: Did you like specific instrumental parts, lyrics,? yes I love the singers’ voice and the banjo playing. The music is beautiful. The story needs better lines. What you are saying is marketable but common. Try for better lines. It would be a hit with line by line analysis of the lyrics.The Jobs of Each Section (does each section do its job: v1–character, context, setting chorus–give the big idea v2–take the big idea further bridge (if necessary) –take the big idea even further 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? Yes 2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more? Somewhat 3) Is my melody interesting? Yes 4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? Yes 5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place? Somewhat
Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? Yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? Dance8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? Happiness9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? Some what 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? With an updated storyline yes.