Broadjam Artist: Groove Fondue
Song: Sweet Inspiration
Reviewer: Redlady8029
Positive Comments: 1) Does my intro make you want to hear the song? Somewhat. need more of a storyline not so many general statements. Show me pictures of how sweet she is.2) Does my opening line draw you in and make you want to hear more?Some what be more specific in your verses. 3) Is my melody interesting? I love the music. Contrast more between the verse and chorus.4) Does my melody get stuck in your head? yes5) Does my chorus stand out and take the song to a higher place?Some what
Constructive Comments: 6) Is my chorus easy to sing along with after one listen? yes 7) What does my song make the listener want to do? Dance? Cry? Laugh? Sing? It makes me want to sing along 8) What universal emotion does my song tap into? happiness9) Is my idea strong enough to carry an entire song? Great start to a good song. Just develop the storyline more 10) Would I want to listen to this over and over in my car? Maybe on the rewrite