Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Wish You Could Smile Coreys
Reviewer: paul sandberg
Positive Comments: very much a Leonard Cohen feel to this, the verses and the lyrics work quite well – the use of a 2nd vocal is nice, although not sure about its use in the chorus, basically because it makes the overall vocal line too strong for the piano accompaniment.vocals are sung with feeling.
Constructive Comments: in the first verse the P in happy pops.For me the melody of the chorus does not fit the piano – it’s as if the piano is still playing the verse and the vocals go somewhere else.The overall mix could be warmer to my ear – a bit more reverb and eq – rolling off the high end would help I think