Broadjam Artist: Marilyn Hall
Song: JOY (Electronic)
Reviewer: Ali Smart
Positive Comments: the mix sounded very clean to me.I liked the breakdown at 1.50, would have liked to hear more about that.a very commercial sounding track. the intro with the pads got my attention early.
Constructive Comments: I thought the track could evolve a little more, the drop around 1.10 could do with some more work, it’s a bit sudden and a bit quieter than the rest of the track.I think there needs to be more variation on the track, its synth on piano for most of the track, maybe use the pads from the start or add a new line which isn’t a arpeggiated. vocal snippets throughout or at the end of each 16 bar might be an idea to boost appeal and keep listeners attention