Broadjam Artist: Patrick Dude
Song: So Far Away
Reviewer: Jeff Roberts
Positive Comments: This sounds like Pink Floyd, Syd Barrett, Nick Drake, and Greg Lake with just a touch of Bowie too. In other words a cool voice that has paisley 60’s vibe. Intelligent and interesting lyrics throughout.
Constructive Comments: There’s a very poor quality to the overall recording, not just one thing. I think “get the fuck up outta here” is too rough for the overall gentle tone of the tune. Actually same for the rap too IMO. I think this would work best as gentle tune throughout. There are some spots where the strumming rhythm is significantly off the meter–that needs fixing. Some bass would be a big help, and some percussion if not full drum kit. I think there’s a very strong song here that needs a lot of work, but a strong song will pay it back if you do it.