Broadjam Artist: The Dots
Song: The Truth
Reviewer: Kate Carpenter
Positive Comments: Creative approach to a break-up song. It’s very real, authentic and brutally honest. There are a lot of guys out there like this guy, so I think that a lot of girls (and maybe guys) can really relate to this song. The vocal is crystal clear every word understandable. Instrumentation/production is pretty basic, but works for the song, at least for a demo, if not more. Favorite lyric: Have to heal after loving you, heart spinning wheel. Good word picture. Any relationship that is so hurtful has got to go. Well done.
Constructive Comments: I can’t figure out the last verse…like the girl is having second thoughts (can’t let go of you). You think that it’s all over and then it’s not? Maybe an overuse of the word shock. Also a word like Overthrew…needs a direct object. Just seems like a problem with the lyric. Overthrew what?I like it though! Nicely done!