Drunk by Ben Allan

Broadjam Artist: Ben AllanSong: DrunkReviewer: Jeff RobertsPositive Comments: This has a good dance pop groove and smooth vocals. There’s an overall romantic vibe. It’s a contender that could be a winner with a few tweaks!Constructive Comments: The v…

Ben Allan

Broadjam Artist: Ben Allan
Song: Drunk

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: This has a good dance pop groove and smooth vocals. There’s an overall romantic vibe. It’s a contender that could be a winner with a few tweaks!

Constructive Comments: The vocal is too dark and doesn’t stand apart from the really dark key parts. Some of the vocal phrasing could match up with the rhythm more for greater punch. ‘drunk’ is kind of an ugly work, both the connotation and literal sound–what about using ‘high’ instead?