SOULS AWAKE CONNECTING IN LIFES MAZE by Gary Mazzola

Broadjam Artist: Gary MazzolaSong: SOULS AWAKE CONNECTING IN LIFES MAZEReviewer: Black Eye AffairPositive Comments: I liked your vocal melody. It was original, but still accessible to the first-time listener. The lyrics seemed good at first listen, and…

Gary Mazzola

Broadjam Artist: Gary Mazzola
Song: SOULS AWAKE CONNECTING IN LIFES MAZE

Reviewer: Black Eye Affair

Positive Comments: I liked your vocal melody. It was original, but still accessible to the first-time listener. The lyrics seemed good at first listen, and your voice has a cool classic rock tonality that I like. Reminds me of a cross between Bob Seeger and Eddie Money.

Constructive Comments: Instrumentation needs a lot of work. The percussion was distracting and oddly timed, and the sounds chosen for your instruments were questionable. Especially toward the end when the midi saxophone (I think) came in it was way too loud and sounded like something from a cheap keyboard. Overall, the song has good potential. A better recording might take you far!