Seven’s Gone by Billy Pilgrim

Billy Pilgrim

Broadjam Artist: Billy Pilgrim
Song: Seven’s Gone

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Great piano sound and a strong main hook. It has a triumphant feel.

Constructive Comments: Great sound & vibe but I don’t think this does enough on its own–it feels like a vocal song. IMO it goes far too long without significant change from the primary hook (which is quite good but don’t wear it out). I would argue for taking out the filtered synth parts that are going ewweeeweeeeooo. All IMO of course, and I hope it’s helpful.

Billy Pilgrim

Broadjam Artist: Billy Pilgrim
Song: Seven’s Gone

Reviewer: Jeff Roberts

Positive Comments: Great piano sound and a strong main hook. It has a triumphant feel.

Constructive Comments: Great sound & vibe but I don’t think this does enough on its own–it feels like a vocal song. IMO it goes far too long without significant change from the primary hook (which is quite good but don’t wear it out). I would argue for taking out the filtered synth parts that are going ewweeeweeeeooo. All IMO of course, and I hope it’s helpful.