Broadjam Peer Song Reviews

Broadjam Artist: Peter Kendall
Song: driving me crazy

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: Original. To the point. More talking than singing – but no complaints because it works with the song.

Constructive Comments: Not too poetic – mostly prose. Something about the drums and heavy string sound makes the song feel heavier than it could. (I want it to be lighter in feel). Even the sound of glass bottles (?) at the end doesn’t lighten it.

Broadjam Artist: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER
Song: Weren’t You The One

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: A Beautiful Broadway-sounding voice singing a song that should be in a musical.

Constructive Comments: Shoudn’t it be “with WHOM you’d rather be”? Telling the whole story makes the song too long.

Broadjam Artist: Nigel Barrett
Song: Quantum Dance

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: Pleasant overall.

Constructive Comments: The Drums stood out (meaning they stood apart from the rest of the sounds.)

Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: Walkin (Gospel Rock Shuffle) – INSTRUMENTAL EDIT

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: Well done! Loved all the instrument sounds especially the organ sound.

Constructive Comments: Even though I personally don’t care for clapping in a song and this one appears to have some clapping, the song is great!

Broadjam Artist: hughett
Song: Dust to Life

Reviewer: Wayne Ammons

Positive Comments: Great energy, like the guitar parts and tones, like the vocal harmonies as well,

Constructive Comments: maybe try a different snare sound?

Broadjam Artist: Jimmy
Song: Champaign taste

Reviewer: The Whythouse

Positive Comments: love the vibe of this song, fast paced bop that kicks ass!the story line of oppisites attract is a time tested and true topic to write about , and you pulled it off perfectly. We have a song similar in topic called Starz Collide which expresses the same topic. The vocals on the song are classic and well versed, you can tell its a pro doing that damn thang! Great Job on this one.

Constructive Comments: nothing to change , all was on point.

Broadjam Artist: Lyfe Concierge Publishing
Song: O Fifth Wheel

Reviewer: The Whythouse

Positive Comments: This is a mash up of Rock, Country and Americana – very unique and has a great market potential for radio , film and sync. love the guitar work and that pedal steel – dope ASF!

Constructive Comments: Where is the words?if you need a song writter/ vocalist on this song – contact meI’d bless this track all day long.

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: The Day I Fell In Love

Reviewer: The Whythouse

Positive Comments: A very classic country feel , I enjoyed the instrumentation and that awsome slide, has a very Willie Nelson vibe.

Constructive Comments: It would have been nice to hear a verse with the female singing , since she’s backing you up ..it makes more sense to me arrangment wise.over all though I enjoyed the song and listened twice.

Broadjam Artist: Bob Bentley
Song: I Put Your Picture Away

Reviewer: The Whythouse

Positive Comments: I enjoyed the music and arrangement.

Constructive Comments: I found the song was too slow for the vocalist, he seemed to stay in the pockets but it was drawn out. I good master and cleaning up the clarity on the track, would make this song much better sonicallly.

Broadjam Artist: ricky c fowler
Song: battle lines (unplugged)

Reviewer: The Whythouse

Positive Comments: Heart warming and beautiful.Real singer song writter here…love it.

Constructive Comments: Nothing needs to be done with this song. Leave it be – its awesome.