Author: bjamreviews

Broadjam Artist: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER
Song: Weren’t You The One

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: beach boys good writing confident good for a tv or movie gig

Constructive Comments: i would somehow make this a little wilder–the vocals are there but need tweaking–an out of space lead of some kind–overall very enjoyable!catnip pat=+=

Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: Leave Ohio Behind

Reviewer: Riq Turner

Positive Comments: Sounds very sync-able. I bet this would be a fun song live too! Nice.

Constructive Comments: Best of luck with this song.

Broadjam Artist: Watching Spaceships
Song: Pearshaped

Reviewer: Lyfe Concierge Publishing

Positive Comments: 80’s and loving it! This song has a scene in silence of the lambs written all over it!

Constructive Comments: I full bridge break down and change with a tad more drive and unique key adjustment might have really brought it home even further for me!

Broadjam Artist: Nathan Totten
Song: We Finally See Beyond

Reviewer: Lyfe Concierge Publishing

Positive Comments: It’s a hit and it is prime for tv and film! Great for a Brad Pit movie like “The Mexican” or Once upon a time in Hollywood!

Constructive Comments: I struggle to find anything, i really tried but couldn’t seem to muster up any constructive comments! Sorry i couldn’t be more of a help to ya!

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Song: DIXIELAND BABY!

Reviewer: Lyfe Concierge Publishing

Positive Comments: I love the heart of the song!

Constructive Comments: Need to work on the recording and timing, mix and master and you may have a hit here!

Broadjam Artist: Peter Kendall
Song: driving me crazy

Reviewer: Lyfe Concierge Publishing

Positive Comments: This is a catchy,lovely little tune.I love the harmonies and the fun nature to it! I can see it playing in a scene in the movie “What about Mary”

Constructive Comments: Would love to hear more harmonies maybe during a breakdown or bridge!

Broadjam Artist: Jay Gross
Song: We Can Make it Tonight Instrumental

Reviewer: Lyfe Concierge Publishing

Positive Comments: I love the solo Guitar and the horns, This track is ready for a scene in a movie! I could see it in the ending credits of Kramer Verses Kramer….

Constructive Comments: You must consider putting words to it, would love to hear it!

Broadjam Artist: Cannimagine Productions
Song: Blood Red Skies

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: This song has a very memorable hook. It’s a positive message that imparts value and encouragement to the listener. Good use of the sailing metaphor. Keep up the good work.

Constructive Comments: Blood-red skies is clever and memorable. But the word blood-red imparts to me a scary image. Is that what you were trying to get across?

Broadjam Artist: Randall Mark
Song: So Far Away

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: What a beautiful voice! So pleasant to listen to. High and sweet with just the right amount of variation on some of those fun notes. It’s a beautiful love song…sounds like it was written in a plane. Great original approach. Nice instrumentation. Love the lyrics.

Constructive Comments: Love lost? His loss! Keep the great songs coming!

Broadjam Artist: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER
Song: The Photo In The Hall

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Pretty involved story. Extremely original. Creative way to produce a very different song. Very dramatic. Liked the police report at the end. Vocalist has a unique voice and style all his own. Reminds me of Burl Ives a little bit.

Constructive Comments: Please post the lyrics. So am I following this right? The daughter/fan ends up having sex with her mom’s ex-boyfriend/her own father? Then he kills his daughter and himself. This is a disturbing story, but could (of course) be true. It’s just very sad. Your pronunciation of the word “stories” threw me a little.