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Whine Whine Whine by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: Whine Whine WhineReviewer: Marshal StacksPositive Comments: Nice vocal. And good mix!Constructive Comments: Maybe try it with out the vocal fills – ducks etc. An acoustic guitar solo might fit better than the organ.

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Whine Whine Whine

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Nice vocal. And good mix!

Constructive Comments: Maybe try it with out the vocal fills – ducks etc. An acoustic guitar solo might fit better than the organ.

Girl In Disguise by Randall Mark

Broadjam Artist: Randall MarkSong: Girl In DisguiseReviewer: LAKOTAHPositive Comments: Early 60’s vibe. Reminds me of Judy Collins or Mamas and Papas. Really like the uplifting quality/feeling of this tune. Melody line was consistent with lyrical co…

Randall Mark

Broadjam Artist: Randall Mark
Song: Girl In Disguise

Reviewer: LAKOTAH

Positive Comments: Early 60’s vibe. Reminds me of Judy Collins or Mamas and Papas. Really like the uplifting quality/feeling of this tune. Melody line was consistent with lyrical content. Very pleasant. Good job.

Constructive Comments: Really don’t have anything constructive on this. This was a solid tune and done appropriately for what it was trying to achieve.

O Big Man by Lyfe Concierge Publishing

Broadjam Artist: Lyfe Concierge PublishingSong: O Big ManReviewer: Marshal StacksPositive Comments: Has a nice 80’s sound. Nice vocal tone.Constructive Comments: Maybe update the sound to be a bit more modern. Would be a great blues tune! Bit hard to h…

Lyfe Concierge Publishing

Broadjam Artist: Lyfe Concierge Publishing
Song: O Big Man

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Has a nice 80’s sound. Nice vocal tone.

Constructive Comments: Maybe update the sound to be a bit more modern. Would be a great blues tune! Bit hard to hear the lyrics.

X-Mas, You’ve Found Jessa by SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABSSong: X-Mas, You’ve Found JessaReviewer: Marshal StacksPositive Comments: Good vocal and mix.Constructive Comments: Maybe replace the organ solo with acoustic guitar solo. Add some well placed jingle bells?

SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: X-Mas, You’ve Found Jessa

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Good vocal and mix.

Constructive Comments: Maybe replace the organ solo with acoustic guitar solo. Add some well placed jingle bells?

I Can See The Day by Peter Boynton

Broadjam Artist: Peter BoyntonSong: I Can See The DayReviewer: LAKOTAHPositive Comments: Great overall. Lyrics are solid and clear. Vocals are on point and appropriate for this kind of song. Reminds me of 90’s rock band styling. Nice use of acousti…

Peter Boynton

Broadjam Artist: Peter Boynton
Song: I Can See The Day

Reviewer: LAKOTAH

Positive Comments: Great overall. Lyrics are solid and clear. Vocals are on point and appropriate for this kind of song. Reminds me of 90’s rock band styling. Nice use of acoustic guitar as well.

Constructive Comments: I think that this has great market potential for rock fans that have been missing a strong male vocal in the rock category.

Carolina Moon by Bill Dake

Broadjam Artist: Bill DakeSong: Carolina MoonReviewer: Marshal StacksPositive Comments: James Taylor sound. Could work as a blues tune as well!Constructive Comments: Maybe speed the song up a touch. Bit more drive.

Bill Dake

Broadjam Artist: Bill Dake
Song: Carolina Moon

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: James Taylor sound. Could work as a blues tune as well!

Constructive Comments: Maybe speed the song up a touch. Bit more drive.

Starz Collide by The Whythouse

Broadjam Artist: The WhythouseSong: Starz CollideReviewer: Marshal StacksPositive Comments: Nice beach vibe. Zac Brown Band sound.Constructive Comments: Try a single voice without back up in the verses. Maybe raise the level of the electric fills.

The Whythouse

Broadjam Artist: The Whythouse
Song: Starz Collide

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Nice beach vibe. Zac Brown Band sound.

Constructive Comments: Try a single voice without back up in the verses. Maybe raise the level of the electric fills.

Running Red by Janet Murphy

Broadjam Artist: Janet MurphySong: Running RedReviewer: Marshal StacksPositive Comments: Nice smooth sound. Great vocal.Constructive Comments: Possibly change the sound to be more current. Less airy sound, more grit.

Janet Murphy

Broadjam Artist: Janet Murphy
Song: Running Red

Reviewer: Marshal Stacks

Positive Comments: Nice smooth sound. Great vocal.

Constructive Comments: Possibly change the sound to be more current. Less airy sound, more grit.