It Ain’t You It’s Me by Albatross

Broadjam Artist: AlbatrossSong: It Ain’t You It’s MeReviewer: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLERPositive Comments: Delicious harmonies , shades of “Living Next Door To Alice” , and “If I Said You Had A Beautiful Body , Would You Hold It Against Me” .Constructive …

Albatross

Broadjam Artist: Albatross
Song: It Ain’t You It’s Me

Reviewer: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER

Positive Comments: Delicious harmonies , shades of “Living Next Door To Alice” , and “If I Said You Had A Beautiful Body , Would You Hold It Against Me” .

Constructive Comments: The backing wasn’t for me . I was looking for something with more of a country feel , but still an enjoyable listen .

Opus for Marionette in F Major by Signal 30

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30Song: Opus for Marionette in F MajorReviewer: Oliver Keynes LafayePositive Comments: It’s a great peace Constructive Comments: It could be better with more professional instrument

Signal 30

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Opus for Marionette in F Major

Reviewer: Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Positive Comments: It’s a great peace

Constructive Comments: It could be better with more professional instrument

Insecurity by Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: InsecurityReviewer: Bill DakePositive Comments: Great contemporary folk tune. Everything works, balance, vocals backing tracks, message/lyrics. Constructive Comments: Nothin’ to add, just a fine song and well done.

Jeff Ashbaker

Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: Insecurity

Reviewer: Bill Dake

Positive Comments: Great contemporary folk tune. Everything works, balance, vocals backing tracks, message/lyrics.

Constructive Comments: Nothin’ to add, just a fine song and well done.

our story by Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Broadjam Artist: Oliver Keynes LafayeSong: our storyReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: This is a really pretty piano piece. Nice piano samples, beautifully played. Keep the good music coming!Constructive Comments: The break in the middle of t…

Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Broadjam Artist: Oliver Keynes Lafaye
Song: our story

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: This is a really pretty piano piece. Nice piano samples, beautifully played. Keep the good music coming!

Constructive Comments: The break in the middle of the song might’ve been a little too long. Work on sticking with the theme all through the piece. The song quit playing at 2:47. I think it’s BJ problem.

We Finally See Beyond by Nathan Totten

Broadjam Artist: Nathan TottenSong: We Finally See BeyondReviewer: Kate CarpenterPositive Comments: This is a really cool and unique love song. One of the reasons I like it is the approach to the guitar…kind of a melding of rock and Spanish guitar. …

Nathan Totten

Broadjam Artist: Nathan Totten
Song: We Finally See Beyond

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: This is a really cool and unique love song. One of the reasons I like it is the approach to the guitar…kind of a melding of rock and Spanish guitar. Add in these driving punchy accent beats that are expertly placed and you have a highly original song. I like the lyrics, too. The emphasis on the relationship isn’t just sex…it’s more of an understanding and accepting of each other. Great word picture: cabin with the fire on. You all did a fantastic job on this track. Really tight and expert production!

Constructive Comments: The song quit playing at 3:17. I think it’s a BJ problem. Will report. The only rhyme I had a problem with was be long and belong.

Temptation by Signal 30

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30Song: TemptationReviewer: John Walradt and Robert QuigleyPositive Comments: Ooooo, great mood with the beautiful haunting, electronic, smooth instrumentation I love. The melody line is memorable, flows easily and pulses simult…

Signal 30

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Temptation

Reviewer: John Walradt and Robert Quigley

Positive Comments: Ooooo, great mood with the beautiful haunting, electronic, smooth instrumentation I love. The melody line is memorable, flows easily and pulses simultaneously. Vocals are airy and seductive…just right for the song. Keyboard accents are a great touch. This song moves with smooth energy… just the kind that can be played again and again without losing interest.

Constructive Comments: How would it sound if the vocals were brought out just a tad more with just a touch more on the limiter after :25? Not sure…just an idea. An envelope could be applied just before then as the start is just right. Lyrically gets really good with visuals like walking in the rain and sitting by the fire…adds something different in the imagination! The ideas of taking passion beyond are very good. The spotlight in this song is the great mood that you’ve set with the vocals and instrumentation.John

COLD LONELY HOUSE by MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGBSong: COLD LONELY HOUSEReviewer: Oliver Keynes LafayePositive Comments: Good emotional track it’s nice to hear Constructive Comments: Keep going I have nothing to correct so hope you already have a chance to place it in a movie

MGB

Broadjam Artist: MGB
Song: COLD LONELY HOUSE

Reviewer: Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Positive Comments: Good emotional track it’s nice to hear

Constructive Comments: Keep going I have nothing to correct so hope you already have a chance to place it in a movie

We Finally See Beyond by Nathan Totten

Broadjam Artist: Nathan TottenSong: We Finally See BeyondReviewer: Oliver Keynes LafayePositive Comments: Good rock track not too violent Constructive Comments: It’s not very my type but I thing it’s a great job

Nathan Totten

Broadjam Artist: Nathan Totten
Song: We Finally See Beyond

Reviewer: Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Positive Comments: Good rock track not too violent

Constructive Comments: It’s not very my type but I thing it’s a great job

I Wish You Love For Christmas by Bob Birthisel

Broadjam Artist: Bob BirthiselSong: I Wish You Love For ChristmasReviewer: Oliver Keynes LafayePositive Comments: Good track and calm Constructive Comments: Have a potential for placing in Christmas movie or library for Christmas style

Bob Birthisel

Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: I Wish You Love For Christmas

Reviewer: Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Positive Comments: Good track and calm

Constructive Comments: Have a potential for placing in Christmas movie or library for Christmas style