Month: March 2022

Broadjam Artist: Watching Spaceships
Song: Pearshaped

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Nice quiet into builds nicely in to a very original song. Angels pray for me, then I smile (love that lyric!). Nice job on the vocals and instrumentation.

Constructive Comments: I wish you would post the lyrics! It might help me to understand everything you are trying to communicate in this song. There’s a lot that I didn’t understand. Work on clarity so that someone who doesn’t know you and has never heard you can understand exactly what you are saying/singing in your song.

Broadjam Artist: Oliver Keynes Lafaye
Song: Dramatic

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Great instrumental! Very stark intro that opens up into a great combination of sounds that present a scary, unnerving ambiance. Tension builds in this song. Expertly written and produced. Bravo!

Constructive Comments: Song quit playing at 2:27. Broadjam’s problem. GRRR why don’t they get this fixed???

Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: Farmer’s Daughter

Reviewer: Kate Carpenter

Positive Comments: Love the guitar intro to this pretty country song. Really great instrumentation and storytelling. Perfect vocals, nice harmonies too. Like the line about “daddy’s gonna tan my hide” street/burning heat – great rhymes. This is a very well-produced track and beautifully performed.

Constructive Comments: Something is still wrong with broadjam. The song quit playing at 2:44. Darn. The only beef I have with this song is a moral one coming from my own perspective. “Made love to the farmer’s daughter” sounds like having sex with her. Just take off your coat and some kind of a one-day stand or something. Maybe you didn’t mean it that way. Maybe I am reading into it, but to me, it cheapens her. No depth of relationship that I could detect. Just my 2 cents. I am a strong believer that sex belongs in marriage.

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: farewell

Reviewer: Strange World Music

Positive Comments: I like the guitar, and the sound which reminds me of country rock and that road trip or that train ride.

Constructive Comments: Love the guitars, love the sound. I can visualise this in a film. Super track.

Broadjam Artist: John Ludwig
Song: Footprints in the Sand

Reviewer: Strange World Music

Positive Comments: I liked the lyrics and the tune is quite catchy. The song generates a good visual of being on the beach.

Constructive Comments: The lyrics flow well and I think it is more of what I would class as a folk song but songs can have more than one genre. A good song.

Broadjam Artist: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS
Song: Undying Waves

Reviewer: Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Positive Comments: Great production really like the cinematic vibe

Constructive Comments: You did a professional job

Broadjam Artist: Vi: 00110110
Song: Concerto for violin and cello, RV 546 Movement 1 (Vivaldi, 2018)

Reviewer: Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Positive Comments: It’s a very beautiful piece you need a great

Constructive Comments: Very well composed and very professional

Broadjam Artist: Greg Lambert
Song: No Fault Line (Male Vocal)

Reviewer: PHIL MITTEN STORYTELLER

Positive Comments: Polished performance , excellent track . Super backing track and some lovely harmonies .

Constructive Comments: I wonder if the lead vocal sang the chorus in the higher register , it would give the track some extra energy .

Broadjam Artist: Randy Calligan
Song: The Procession

Reviewer: Oliver Keynes Lafaye

Positive Comments: I really like this track remember me some sad scene in great tv show it s perfect

Constructive Comments:

Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: bruder leichtfuss

Reviewer: SKY HIGH MUSIC LABS

Positive Comments: Very nice groove….. love the guitars the drums, Hell, All of it…..

Constructive Comments: all this needs are killer lyrics and the voice to sell it