Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: We Say I Love You / Country
Reviewer: Peter Boynton
Positive Comments: -I really like the melodic variation of what I’m guessing is your pre-chorus (can’t see the lyrics…). It’s the catchiest melody of the song!-vs1 builds nicely to the pre-chorus in terms of the melodic contrast-the groove and vibe are very nice
Constructive Comments: -the energy drops at the chorus. vs1 to pre-chorus1 climb in pitch and tension very nicely, but I miss a pay-off in the chorus. I wanted the melody to continue up to an ‘A’.-I don’t know the title, and am not sure what the lyric hook is? -seems like a Pop song, not a Country song – which is totally cool!-the instrumental break @2:50 into the song threw me. Not sure you need it.-nice structure, chord progression, all the way to the chorus. Bump the chorus up and heighten it and I think the song would work well. It has a Christopher Cross vibe.-good work!