Broadjam Artist: Warren Hein
Song: Antennae Cable or Satellite
Reviewer: David James
Positive Comments: The lyrics idea is great and very original. I really like the acoustic guitar and percussion arrangement. Good vocal performance. The song is catchy. The chord sequence is effective. I love the chord change and change of direction at 4.15, which gives the song a dreamy ending. Nicely recorded.
Constructive Comments: Although I understand why you’ve added the electronic effects at the beginning and end of the song, personally I think they’re superfluous. As I’ve stated above I really like the lyric idea, however I think the repetition of ‘sweet voice tonight’ in line three of the chorus, when it occurs in the second line is slightly repetitive and for that reason I’ve marked down the lyrics a notch. One last thought, I think there is room in the choruses for ad libs or ‘reply’ vocal lines just to off-set some of those long syllables. Overall I really like the song, but feel it would be even better with a few tweaks.