Peer Song Reviews From Broadjam.com
Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: I Still Ain’t Heard My MusicReviewer: Sam CooperPositive Comments: What made us do this in the first place? The Raydee-Adee-O! Fun song.Constructive Comments: I bet this would shine more if it had a more rockabilly…
Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: I Still Ain’t Heard My Music
Reviewer: Sam Cooper
Positive Comments: What made us do this in the first place? The Raydee-Adee-O! Fun song.
Constructive Comments: I bet this would shine more if it had a more rockabilly-sounding vocal track.
Broadjam Artist: Laurence WatkinsSong: That GirlReviewer: Sam CooperPositive Comments: Interesting pop song. Well done, production-wise.Constructive Comments: If it isn’t already in the pop category, I’d move it there.
Broadjam Artist: Laurence Watkins
Song: That Girl
Reviewer: Sam Cooper
Positive Comments: Interesting pop song. Well done, production-wise.
Constructive Comments: If it isn’t already in the pop category, I’d move it there.
Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art CoreySong: Chain of Sin Anthony’s CoreysReviewer: Sam CooperPositive Comments: Cool tune. Darkly poetic vibes.Constructive Comments: Good work. No recommendations for changes.
Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Chain of Sin Anthony’s Coreys
Reviewer: Sam Cooper
Positive Comments: Cool tune. Darkly poetic vibes.
Constructive Comments: Good work. No recommendations for changes.
Broadjam Artist: Bob BirthiselSong: That’s One Thing (You Don’t Understand About Me)Reviewer: larry costaPositive Comments: wow, this is really special. i love this… its inspirational, and has elements of nostalgia as well. keep up the good work , t…
Broadjam Artist: Bob Birthisel
Song: That’s One Thing (You Don’t Understand About Me)
Reviewer: larry costa
Positive Comments: wow, this is really special. i love this… its inspirational, and has elements of nostalgia as well. keep up the good work , this really is something very good and the drums are excellent!!!!!!
Constructive Comments: hey, nothing needs to change.. its great!!!!!!!!!! i like the feeling…
Broadjam Artist: Nigel BarrettSong: There but for the grace of godReviewer: larry costaPositive Comments: very interesting. at first, i heard a bit 80’s nostalgia. then, it got into the Grace of God which then made me think the story was a religious o…
Broadjam Artist: Nigel Barrett
Song: There but for the grace of god
Reviewer: larry costa
Positive Comments: very interesting. at first, i heard a bit 80’s nostalgia. then, it got into the Grace of God which then made me think the story was a religious one,.. either way, i like it as it is… and to hear the lyric there for the grace of God go I.. in song, is really inspiring,
Constructive Comments: i really thought it was great. nothing to change there. i dont normally listen to pop style music, but, this was refreshing and not forced on me like other songs make me feel.
Broadjam Artist: Douglas Branson aka dB+1Song: Suicide BomberReviewer: Earl JenkinsPositive Comments: Took me a minute to get into it, but this song is pretty fun. Definite a good Pixies vibe, vocalizations remind me of They Might Be Giants, and the ov…
Broadjam Artist: Douglas Branson aka dB+1
Song: Suicide Bomber
Reviewer: Earl Jenkins
Positive Comments: Took me a minute to get into it, but this song is pretty fun. Definite a good Pixies vibe, vocalizations remind me of They Might Be Giants, and the overall feel is definitely Alt/Punk.Lyrically, this is clearly scathing rhetoric on the state of politics and foreign policy, picking at the undercurrents of the time it was written (early 2000s). I especially love the part near the end, with “suicide bomber” and “peace and love songs” playing against each other.Structurally, this song is full of surprises, but in that good garage-punk Pixies feel that keeps the listener interested. The solo section is right on, especially the second half.Oh, and I love the use of harmonies in this song. Right from the middle of the first part, they are tasty.I would definitely listen to this again.
Constructive Comments: Lyrically/vocally, there were a few points where the cadence might be improved. I get that this is supposed to feel a bit “ranty”, but the best spoken word rants still presents a candence that leads the user on to the next phrase.The beginning felt a little “meh” to me — not a lot, but it was definitely the weakest part of the song. It kind of stands out, because by the end I was fully engaged, but the beginning didn’t grab me anywhere near as much.Oh, and one other thing: in the parts where you’re talk-singing (no melody), I’d add a bit more reverb. But that’s just me.
Broadjam Artist: Robert J.Song: The Saddest March Of AllReviewer: MGBPositive Comments: Very well done and topical piece. Extremely witty lyrics. Constructive Comments: Great work!
Broadjam Artist: Robert J.
Song: The Saddest March Of All
Reviewer: MGB
Positive Comments: Very well done and topical piece. Extremely witty lyrics.
Constructive Comments: Great work!
Broadjam Artist: HighsmythSong: HomeReviewer: MGBPositive Comments: Very unique and fresh piece. I love the sudden appearance and sudden departure of the bridge which happens several times. Good instrumentation.Constructive Comments: Nice, smooth piece.
Broadjam Artist: Hartmut OberdieckSong: cowboylandReviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatPositive Comments: Very nice and delicate I so appreciate a good instrumental like this.Whoops!! Not an instrumental! Nice trick!Constructive Comments: I liked the …
Broadjam Artist: Hartmut Oberdieck
Song: cowboyland
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Positive Comments: Very nice and delicate I so appreciate a good instrumental like this.Whoops!! Not an instrumental! Nice trick!
Constructive Comments: I liked the different sounds that are usually not heard or used in this manner. Makes me curious about your songlist.
Broadjam Artist: Jeff AshbakerSong: The River Has To FlowReviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatPositive Comments: Like the message and delivery of this song. Nice subtle delivery Nice balance, harmonies, and engineering! Everybody gets champagne!Constr…
Broadjam Artist: Jeff Ashbaker
Song: The River Has To Flow
Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Positive Comments: Like the message and delivery of this song. Nice subtle delivery Nice balance, harmonies, and engineering! Everybody gets champagne!
Constructive Comments: I miss these old style ditties that feel good to the heart! We need more of these in the crazy world we live in today!Sonically Yours! Catnip=+=
