Month: December 2019

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Rosa Danced In Veracruz Coreys

Reviewer: Barry Osbourn

Positive Comments: I like the song, good lyrics , well played, nice story telling. I lived in Veracruz for 6 months when I was 29. Loved it. I think I met Rosa!

Constructive Comments: The only thing that I can think of, and it may just be my opinion, But the vocals sit out front, on top a little too much for me, mostly in the front half of the song, the later part of the song the music gets luuder and the mix seems to work better but the first minute of the song it just seems like the music is somewhere behind the singer, not integrated. maybe bring the instruments up in the mix just a bit.

Broadjam Artist: Signal 30
Song: Visions

Reviewer: MURIEL

Positive Comments: Very involved in song, lot of passion

Constructive Comments: Intro a little too long, song too long for current market, would like to see more variation in vocals and mechanics especially at the beginning of the song, more variations in drumming to go with bridge

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Song: BEFORE THE WORLD STOPS SPINNIN!

Reviewer: MURIEL

Positive Comments: Better start right now, loved the hook, the song is very memorable

Constructive Comments: The background drowns out or is in competition with the lead at times. Some parts can be a little more energetic or variation in pitches— loved the hook — so true- better start right now!

Broadjam Artist: TOM HENRY
Song: Take Me As I Am

Reviewer: MURIEL

Positive Comments: loved the harmonies, love the energy and lyrics

Constructive Comments: more variation in the bridge and more instruments

Broadjam Artist: Jeana Potthoff
Song: I Will Love You Forever (with strings)

Reviewer: MURIEL

Positive Comments: the transitions in instruments created a change in mood and feeling which kept my attention

Constructive Comments: Loved it, don’t really have negatives to say about this artist-

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: Bifocal Blues

Reviewer: MURIEL

Positive Comments: like the variations of singing and vocal creations, the artist was very upbeat and engaging

Constructive Comments: the quality of recording the sound could be better as a balance

Broadjam Artist: MCarollShaw
Song: Truth Never Changes

Reviewer: MURIEL

Positive Comments: liked the originality of the lyrics and the expressions the artist had

Constructive Comments: more variation in the arrangement and utilize more instruments while making point. More rise and fall in vocals with clarity

Broadjam Artist: Barry Osbourn
Song: Hold On

Reviewer: MURIEL

Positive Comments: electric guitar solos

Constructive Comments: Would like to hear a variation in the drums and maybe some tambourine or something along that line—maybe some answering with the horns.

Broadjam Artist: Ladee V
Song: Revenge

Reviewer: Stephen Bell king shyne promotions

Positive Comments: A new age rapper

Constructive Comments:

Broadjam Artist: Margie & Art Corey
Song: Took My Monkey To A Wedding Coreys

Reviewer: Jay Gross

Positive Comments: very interesting song. Loved the story line and the twist. Quicky enough to want to hear more. Nice chord changes and a quirky interesting vocal as well. Well done has some potential in a movie TV or even on the radio

Constructive Comments: Really not much to say to improve at least from my perspective. maybe a change in the tempo when the twist isreveiled. Just thinking out loud.