Month: October 2019

Broadjam Artist: Charlie Shock
Song: THE WAY LIFE GOES

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Sounds like where Kenny Chesney may have got his ideas. Then polished it

Constructive Comments: It’s good but it seems like just a knock off of a few other songs.

Broadjam Artist: Christian Taylor Michaels
Song: When You Wake

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Beautiful piano, great voice, and feel.

Constructive Comments: I think you can find some better quality lyrics that still rhyme. It’s a near miss. some of the lyrics are good some are too simple and maybe seem uninteresting. sorry

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: She Can Fly

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: I like the rhythm both voices blend very nicely. It sounds good

Constructive Comments: I just cant follow the lyrics standing on the corner looking at the sky. I know what she knows, where she goes.. I know that she can fly… what the heck are we talking about? if there’s a story i missed it, listened twice.. i give up. it just dosent make sense to me sorry.

Broadjam Artist: Mark S. Ludes (MSL)
Song: A Shot of Luck

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Shot of luck and a bottle of love is good ! Roll with that. Your voice is there I think you have a good idea.

Constructive Comments: I would drop the bb king and ALL of the down feeling stuff. Save that for a different song. Stay focused on the “shot of luck and bottle of love”. everybody can relate to that. shot of luck and bottle of luck is your hook. stay focused on that and re-write. Drop EVERYTHING that is negative. You can do it !

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: 21. Unzip My Heart

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Nice voice and instrumentals and feel

Constructive Comments: The lyrics are confusing. if “Unzip my heart” is the theme why did we need to hear about an arrow? I think it Should be one or the other.

Broadjam Artist: David Watson
Song: That’s What I Call Livin’

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Great voice and instrumental

Constructive Comments: That’s what I call living? you’re basically telling people to F off. and then saying that’s what I call living. not a great message my friend. Leave this long haired country boy alone, it aint.

Broadjam Artist: amy abernathy
Song: Paint the canvas

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Song has a good idea.

Constructive Comments: Your references to the brush the canvas are not telling us enough about what your trying to say. The harmonizing is off pitch. the timing /rhythm is off. Keep working on it i need to know what the brush is why the colors matter if your going to talk about them…maybe.. not sure…

Broadjam Artist: Greg Johnson
Song: Country Club Motor Lodge

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Beautiful voice and piano.

Constructive Comments: Lyrics are a bit forced to fit the narrative but its a good start, try to get more creative?

Broadjam Artist: Donovan Tucker
Song: I Found You

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Great voice and instrumental. song starts off well.

Constructive Comments: So the story starts off well like it will be a story about how she saved you, but then it changes to a story of your thankfulness but we dont get to feel it because we dont know the story. it’s like you may need to make two stories (songs) because we can’t connect with the combination like you would want us to. I hope that helps. I had to listen to it twice to understand why i wasn’t drawn into it. you have potential.

Broadjam Artist: Susan Nikas
Song: Seven Years

Reviewer: Rooster

Positive Comments: Great instrumental

Constructive Comments: The idea behind the song is good but its just not very catchy. The title says it all before i heard it during the listen and after i heard, … I still feel the same, kind of uninspired. sorry. Ther is passion in the story somewhere. you gotta bring it out !