In Natures Temple / New Age by Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt ClodsSong: In Natures Temple / New AgeReviewer: Matthew CostelloPositive Comments: I perceived and interweaving of two dominant themes with seemingly different bar lengths. Perhaps they were loops. Toge…

Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods

Broadjam Artist: Uncle Spider & The Electric Dirt Clods
Song: In Natures Temple / New Age

Reviewer: Matthew Costello

Positive Comments: I perceived and interweaving of two dominant themes with seemingly different bar lengths. Perhaps they were loops. Together they were emotionally evocative for me. Angst, longing, evening were all things I “saw” in the music. It also has a tension which i thought could be used cinematically. I thought it was adventurous.

Constructive Comments: This piece is dominated by strings. Changing some of the parts to instruments like woodwinds, brass, or even bell sounds, would interject some other colors into the piece. I also hear a tremolo effect towards the center of the audio image. I couldn’t figure out if it was an intentional effect or a by product of the interaction between the string themes. It drew my attention at first and I actually didn’t want to continue listening. I was not able to discern the themes until I made a second listen of the whole piece. Perhaps that is what the composer intended, so I won’t say it is right or wrong. But it may be worthwhile to explore changing that.

New Creation by Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate CarpenterSong: New CreationReviewer: MCarollShawPositive Comments: This song should go over well with a children’s choir. The idea is reduced to an understandable concept for children. The repetition is a good teaching tool and …

Kate Carpenter

Broadjam Artist: Kate Carpenter
Song: New Creation

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: This song should go over well with a children’s choir. The idea is reduced to an understandable concept for children. The repetition is a good teaching tool and complexity had been eliminated.

Constructive Comments: Kind of boring for adults, but with this sort of thing… there you are.

Love Will Find the Way Back Home- instrumental by Kevin Desire/Cholinga Praise

Broadjam Artist: Kevin Desire/Cholinga PraiseSong: Love Will Find the Way Back Home- instrumentalReviewer: MCarollShawPositive Comments: This song shows a great deal of flexibility. Is it Latin? Country? R&B? It could be played in any of those environ…

Kevin Desire/Cholinga Praise

Broadjam Artist: Kevin Desire/Cholinga Praise
Song: Love Will Find the Way Back Home- instrumental

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: This song shows a great deal of flexibility. Is it Latin? Country? R&B? It could be played in any of those environments (More latin than anything to me.) So that’s good. It can be danced to. It’s just all around useful. It is also romantic which is something that is being looked for (opportunity-wise).

Constructive Comments: Nothing to improve upon.

IF I DIDN’T HAVE YOU! by Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatSong: IF I DIDN’T HAVE YOU!Reviewer: MCarollShawPositive Comments: Variety is always good. This music is reminiscent of something that must have existed before the roaring ’20’s. The old piano sound and acco…

Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Broadjam Artist: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat
Song: IF I DIDN’T HAVE YOU!

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: Variety is always good. This music is reminiscent of something that must have existed before the roaring ’20’s. The old piano sound and accordion? is very effective. The first verse is good. Altogether it is pleasant.

Constructive Comments: The music seemed to start and slow down at several points. That’s unusual but it didn’t seem intentional. Search your whole “life through” until you “heard” (not FOUND)? That says the objective of the lyrics is to rhyme and to necessarily make a whole lot of sense. That’s O.K too if that is what you intend.

Me and the Moon by Greg Johnson

Broadjam Artist: Greg JohnsonSong: Me and the MoonReviewer: MCarollShawPositive Comments: Excellent song. It should definitely meet the criteria for SEVERAL of the opportunities presented on this site. It is smooth, the arrangement is great, and the…

Greg Johnson

Broadjam Artist: Greg Johnson
Song: Me and the Moon

Reviewer: MCarollShaw

Positive Comments: Excellent song. It should definitely meet the criteria for SEVERAL of the opportunities presented on this site. It is smooth, the arrangement is great, and the instrumentation couldn’t be better. The piano is great. The horn is wonderful.

Constructive Comments: I found the lyrics slightly wordy but not overly so. The song is VERY easy to listen to.

Speaking Orange by StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecordsSong: Speaking OrangeReviewer: Ashley MartinPositive Comments: The lyrics are incredible! Crafty poetry, great metaphorical visuals, this song does indeed put colors in my mind 🙂 I really like the voice very authentic …

StarburstRecords

Broadjam Artist: StarburstRecords
Song: Speaking Orange

Reviewer: Ashley Martin

Positive Comments: The lyrics are incredible! Crafty poetry, great metaphorical visuals, this song does indeed put colors in my mind 🙂 I really like the voice very authentic and feels connected to the story.

Constructive Comments: I feel like the ending could be done a little better, it just ends abruptly, maybe try slowing or fading out?

Can’t get it thru my heart by Greg Johnson

Broadjam Artist: Greg JohnsonSong: Can’t get it thru my heartReviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatPositive Comments: like the laidback style on this song good tone on the voicereminds me of Beachboys in early days! Constructive Comments: like the…

Greg Johnson

Broadjam Artist: Greg Johnson
Song: Can’t get it thru my heart

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: like the laidback style on this song good tone on the voicereminds me of Beachboys in early days!

Constructive Comments: like the organ coming in—background could me mixed a tad strongerI believe this could be remixed to be much stronger—-were you mixing through earphones or speakers?Bring the voices out a tiny bit more-they could be more clear with EQI believe this is my ole California Sunshine buddy!All the Best! Catnip Pat

That’s What I Call Livin’ by David Watson

Broadjam Artist: David WatsonSong: That’s What I Call Livin’Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip PatPositive Comments: nice,full sound, like the breaks,good playin-interesting startConstructive Comments: not much to add to this nice,tuneAll the Best! …

David Watson

Broadjam Artist: David Watson
Song: That’s What I Call Livin’

Reviewer: Patrick E. Muth/Catnip Pat

Positive Comments: nice,full sound, like the breaks,good playin-interesting start

Constructive Comments: not much to add to this nice,tuneAll the Best! Catnip Pat

Sign (ft. CoriAnder & Ruth Gillies) by David James

Broadjam Artist: David JamesSong: Sign (ft. CoriAnder & Ruth Gillies)Reviewer: Charlie ShockPositive Comments: Where do i start? The lead vocals suit the song perfectly and the musicianship is flawless!!! This is one of the BEST songs that i’ve had the…

David James

Broadjam Artist: David James
Song: Sign (ft. CoriAnder & Ruth Gillies)

Reviewer: Charlie Shock

Positive Comments: Where do i start? The lead vocals suit the song perfectly and the musicianship is flawless!!! This is one of the BEST songs that i’ve had the pleasure to review on Broadjam! If this artist isn’t destined for success-then the music business is TRULY BROKEN!!!

Constructive Comments: I love it and have absolutely no suggestions for improvement. Very best wishes for profound success!!! (Charlie Shock)